We also discussed 4 simple steps for making your essays sound incredible!
1. Vary sentence length- if not it sounds choppy!
2. Vary sentence beginnings- don;t make the reader hate reading your essay, like the cookie.
3. Eliminate unnecessary words!
4. Make sure it flows- change up the sentence structure every once in awhile.
*Homework: Due next class, body of contrasting essay on the North and the South.